"..takes me close/closer to my heart/for I live there..." beautiful lines Cyclopseven. Would that more had your self-awareness.
Short but wonderful piece!!"Closer to my heart/for I live there/Where my heart lives" - you have put them beautifully which I couldn't express in words...
The poem builds to the stunning beauty of those last two lingering lines! Wonderful!
The beauty of the mist is it keeps the dust of the past down that you may feel your way to your heart without choking.
Very, very touching.
Beautiful… touched by those lines and the hidden truth.
Thanks for internet and the oppertunity to see beauty. The last lines of your poem are so beautiful
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