I whisked away my fear
And stared at her face from far
In motionless sleep she appeared peaceful
With eternal smile visibly etched
On the face which was lively before,
A conviction of deepest nature
Anchored within my existence
That she is in eternal dance
In the arms of an angel.
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Eternal Dance reminds me of Sosmic Dance by Shiva!
ReplyDeleteI liked your verse.
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wow... really beautiful visage in words.
ReplyDeleteAah! this was sad but such a well written piece from soul.
ReplyDeleteI take it was your mother in your mind, Cyclop,
ReplyDeleteIt was touching -
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Just so touching. Thank you.
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Sad, peaceful and beautiful.
ReplyDeletesad but so serene and sweet..
ReplyDelete"Eternal dance" great image!
ReplyDeletegorgeous.
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