Sunday, November 01, 2009

Transition

........carryontuesday


I whisked away my fear

And stared at her face from far

In motionless sleep she appeared peaceful

With eternal smile visibly etched

On the face which was lively before,

A conviction of deepest nature

Anchored within my existence

That she is in eternal dance

In the arms of an angel.



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9 comments:

  1. Eternal Dance reminds me of Sosmic Dance by Shiva!

    I liked your verse.

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  2. wow... really beautiful visage in words.

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  3. Aah! this was sad but such a well written piece from soul.

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  4. I take it was your mother in your mind, Cyclop,

    It was touching -

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. Just so touching. Thank you.

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    http://torristravels.blogspot.com/2009/11/on-arms-of-angel.html

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