Friday, August 21, 2009

Rickety Life

..............carryontuesday



When a journey begins badly

It rarely ends well,

And, the rickety sounds of a loosened wheel

Shall follow one all along his life.

Like the misty ray of the sun

That struggles hard to penetrate the clouds,

Like the stream at the edge of the village

That screams loud at the height of suffocation,

Like the night’s enveloping darkness

Marked with apoplexy,

A journey begins badly too

Rarely ends well.


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5 comments:

  1. Good write.."stream that screams of suffocation" that was a well portayed image!

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  2. Its all a perception, Cyclop, :)

    well written, though

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. If it's not right from the getgo, it doesn't get any better. I've learned this lesson the hard way, and I've seen the same lesson bless me.

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  4. All part of the learning process.

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  5. That was deep and well worth the read!!

    Loved your take of the prompt

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