Sunday, December 07, 2008

Redeemer

(I am dedicating this poem to all my friends from Malaysia and also from other parts of the word - Advance Merry Christmas from me.)


His was a
warrior’s
shield,
firmament
of unifying
love. Him,
the Christ
the world hails.
our burdens our sins unforgiven
by mortals
ordinary He bears them. on the cross He was nailed
by hypocrites of yonder, unknown to them His loving
power. in pain yet He forgave them the ignoramus.
in God,
He trust
His might.
this pure
Son of God
the Saviour
is glorified
again
the day
He was born.
Merry Christmas.

©cyclopseven. All rights reserved 071208
(Posted elsewhere before)

4 comments:

  1. nicely done and I like the way you placed the words to reflect the cross--reminds me of some of the poetry of George Herbert (Easter Wing's, done in the shape of a butterfly)

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  2. Beautiful work. The words are precious.Thank you so much.

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  3. Sage..Thank you. Hope this Christmas brings more shine to your life. God Bless.

    Venus66...Thank you for the appreciation buddy.

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  4. Wonderfully done. It captures the spirit of the season beautifully.

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