Penetrates the little gaps between the planks
Shooting shards of light to kiss the darkness.
My feet carried me cautiously inside the barn
With a little wonder what the shine is all about
And, I watched with eyes opened wide
The yellow aura
Naked - they stand hugging each other
Coyly, staring at me without blinking their eyes
I was embarrassed with excitement rushing over me.
I braved myself floating towards the two
Yet they remain nuzzled towards each other
Without a little care of a presence there.
Shyly I touched their bodies
My sense of tactile died as everything flattened smoothly
And, I removed the poster from the wall
Rolled it and walked out from my dream.
Very good take on the quote - I wasn't expecting that ending.
ReplyDeleteyou got me there great twist and well written
ReplyDeleteinteresting take...
ReplyDeleteI really like that this prompt has cause so many poems that involve a surprise. Nice writing.
ReplyDeletethe last part was unexpected but it makes the first part seem all the more alluring
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