Friday, November 21, 2008

Agitations

Belligerent rattles
Summoning my mind
With thoughts, paralyzing.
I mustered
Every bit of strength I have
Confronting, the agitation.

Ubiquitous indeed
Upheavals in life,
Even in dream
It bleeds red.

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7 comments:

venus66 said...

My dear friend, so much of sadness in this poem. My heart goes to you. Keep praying my dear friend. We back here will pray too. God Bless. Love.

sage said...

I hope the agitation is limited to your dreams... You have drawn a powerful image with these words...

Devika said...

"Bloody dreams"!?..oh my, what am i saying :))

but true -- no? dreams should never bleed..how can they be dreams then..call them nightmares..

will come again to see you reciting poem in a happy mood..:)

wishes!
devika

Scarlet said...

I can feel the pain. Ouch!

mayz said...

y so much pain dude??
tk cr

cyclopseven said...

Venus, thank you and keep praying please.

Sage, I wish it is so. Alas!! it is not. Thanks buddy.

Devika, thanks Devika. I pray that the happy mood will dawn soon.

Scarlet, thanks for sharing buddy.

Mayz, life poses many things that we do not understand, or perhaps do not make effort to understand, thus the pain. Thank you.

Janice Thomson said...

Oh Cyclopseven hope all is resolved soon - when it starts interfering with dreams one must fight back. My thoughts are with you.