Wednesday, October 08, 2008

Fighting the pain

Revolting fear
Cascading within
As I wriggle out
Daily, from the pain.
Unspoken taste of memories
Skateboarding across my mind
As I attempt to crush the worries
Daily, from the unwanted strain.
In pain I hum away, daily
Chasing away the wrinkles of agony
As I keep the fight on, vaguely
My battle against time makes me lonely.

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  1. Very touching.Let me take your pain my dear friend.Take care.God Bless.

  2. This poem makes me want to create new memories, pleasant ones. :)

  3. It is the same with all of us, right? Any fight against time can make one become lonely. It's true. Don't fight. Live on.

  4. Pain and skateboards, they do seem to go together! I like the line of the memories skateboarding across your mind.

  5. Aha..Venus66 you are very kind, buddy. That's enough to heal me awhile. Thank you.

    Yes, should be pleasantly lived, even in the middle of pain. But, not many hold the key to this secret. Thank you.

    Life as it as it is always full of pain and pleasure. Thank you.

    Metaphors works wonder in poetry Sage. Thank you.