Sunday, November 01, 2009

Transition

........carryontuesday


I whisked away my fear

And stared at her face from far

In motionless sleep she appeared peaceful

With eternal smile visibly etched

On the face which was lively before,

A conviction of deepest nature

Anchored within my existence

That she is in eternal dance

In the arms of an angel.



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9 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Eternal Dance reminds me of Sosmic Dance by Shiva!

I liked your verse.

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Jeevan said...

wow... really beautiful visage in words.

swapnap said...

Aah! this was sad but such a well written piece from soul.

Devika said...

I take it was your mother in your mind, Cyclop,

It was touching -

wishes,
devika

b said...

Just so touching. Thank you.

b

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keithsramblings said...

Sad, peaceful and beautiful.

Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

sad but so serene and sweet..

Anne said...

"Eternal dance" great image!

illyriataylor said...

gorgeous.